tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2917328764825378054.post5907809129483880290..comments2023-09-20T05:39:21.227-07:00Comments on Inking Cap: Character DescriptionsDebhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13020235392352824025noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2917328764825378054.post-34207065214119273572010-08-12T13:06:50.973-07:002010-08-12T13:06:50.973-07:00Arlene, I agree. I love the story where you don&#...Arlene, I agree. I love the story where you don't see the person's beauty until you get to know them. But this wasn't the case. A stranger was sidetracked by his hotness, yet when I first met him I thought he was fat and middleaged. <br /><br />Linda, your ACE writing group will help all they can.DJ Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04615339246113917504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2917328764825378054.post-65220161369316892612010-08-12T10:05:44.824-07:002010-08-12T10:05:44.824-07:00Oooh that's bothersome! Of course, I get that ...Oooh that's bothersome! Of course, I get that the main character might not find the main love interest attractive at first; that just makes the love story more interesting. But, we should see the transition clearly from unattractiveness to attractiveness.The Scarlet Tarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799143168415937513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2917328764825378054.post-60821382790222465712010-08-12T08:32:58.401-07:002010-08-12T08:32:58.401-07:00It makes me nervous that I will have inconsistenci...It makes me nervous that I will have inconsistencies in my story with all the rewriting,etc. I have faith that my ace writing group will help me catch them though. ;)Blush a.k.a. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05044818573568031853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2917328764825378054.post-11835734165686426412010-08-12T08:08:26.459-07:002010-08-12T08:08:26.459-07:00I've had that happen to me before. I don't...I've had that happen to me before. I don't remember the book, but I specifically remember reading a story that the main character's hair color changed halfway through. Very strange indeed!Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13020235392352824025noreply@blogger.com