Just an observation.
A few days ago I finished a reading a book. (I haven't finished a book all summer.) It was ok, nothing ground-breaking. But I have one complaint.
There was a relationship that developed later in the story. When we frist met the male interest I didn't catch that he was attractive. In fact I thought he was dumpy and yucky. Then later when the relationship develops there is a comment that a random woman is checking out his hottness. Really? He's hot? I had no idea. It was hard to transition that thought.
So, make sure that your characters are clear. Happy writing.