The Inkers met last night. We wrote for approximately 120 minutes and then we shared a little of our writing. (There was also amazing food, as always, with Kirk winning the prize for best of show with AMAZING Raspberry Sweet Rolls.)
During sharing time, the afore-mentioned winner, Sir-Kirk-A-Lot shared a paragraph. In his paragraph there were two places he put brackets:
1) [girl name] and [girl name]
2) [gun] and [gun]
Later I was lamenting that I was still unsure how to describe my demons. I received excellent advice: Use the brackets.
I'm wondering if brackets could replace yada-yada-yada. "I went out with him to [ ] and we [ ] and then we [ ]. Oh my you should have seen [ ]."
Which leads me to think of George Costanza which always puts a smile on my face.